larryhammer: topless woman lying prone with a poem by Sappho painted on her back, label: "Greek poetry is sexy" (Greek poetry is sexy)
Larry Hammer ([personal profile] larryhammer) wrote in [personal profile] radiantfracture 2022-05-26 05:46 pm (UTC)

Hmm. That first line is solid iambic, but the second is rough enough (with two off-beats that get stressed enough those feet are almost spondees) it doesn't jangle for me. Again, preferences at this level.
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