egret: egret in Harlem Meer (Default)
egret ([personal profile] egret) wrote in [personal profile] radiantfracture 2023-03-30 05:18 am (UTC)

I reread it again and it flows better today.
I think I had my iPad in portrait orientation and was seeing truncated lines that were visually influencing me.

I am a sensitive creature. *swoons* ;)
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