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calimac ([personal profile] calimac) wrote in [personal profile] radiantfracture 2024-09-15 04:41 pm (UTC)

"Our innermost self" is a lot clearer and more natural language than "the deepest space in us," for one. "Chamber of our heart, which has outgrown is" is likewise clearer than the alternative.
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