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radiantfracture: The words Learn Teach Challenge imposed on books (Learn Teach Challenge)

Next week, thinking about poetic conversations, games, tributes and formalisms, I thought I'd teach Terrance Hayes' "The Golden Shovel"; and then it came up this morning as the Poetry magazine poem of the day.

If you don't already know the game Hayes is playing, can you work it out? How does the result feel to you?

(If you do already know, feel free to comment anyway.)


The Golden Shovel
By Terrance Hayes

after Gwendolyn Brooks

I. 1981

When I am so small Da’s sock covers my arm, we
cruise at twilight until we find the place the real

men lean, bloodshot and translucent with cool.
His smile is a gold-plated incantation as we

drift by women on bar stools, with nothing left
in them but approachlessness. This is a school

I do not know yet. But the cue sticks mean we
are rubbed by light, smooth as wood, the lurk

of smoke thinned to song. We won’t be out late.
Standing in the middle of the street last night we

watched the moonlit lawns and a neighbor strike
his son in the face. A shadow knocked straight

Da promised to leave me everything: the shovel we
used to bury the dog, the words he loved to sing

his rusted pistol, his squeaky Bible, his sin.
The boy’s sneakers were light on the road. We

watched him run to us looking wounded and thin.
He’d been caught lying or drinking his father’s gin.

He’d been defending his ma, trying to be a man. We
stood in the road, and my father talked about jazz,

how sometimes a tune is born of outrage. By June
the boy would be locked upstate. That night we

got down on our knees in my room. If I should die
before I wake. Da said to me, it will be too soon.


II. 1991

Into the tented city we go, we-
akened by the fire’s ethereal

afterglow. Born lost and cool-
er than heartache. What we

know is what we know. The left
hand severed and school-

ed by cleverness. A plate of we-
ekdays cooking. The hour lurk-

ing in the afterglow. A late-
night chant. Into the city we

go. Close your eyes and strike
a blow. Light can be straight-

ened by its shadow. What we
break is what we hold. A sing-

ular blue note. An outcry sin-
ged exiting the throat. We

push until we thin, thin-
king we won’t creep back again.

While God licks his kin, we
sing until our blood is jazz,

we swing from June to June.
We sweat to keep from we-

eping. Groomed on a die-
t of hunger, we end too soon.


radiantfracture: The words Learn Teach Challenge imposed on books (Learn Teach Challenge)
What do we think about Erin Morgenstern's The Starless Sea as the novel for a first-year lit course?

A friend recommended it. I've just started reading -- well, I'm up to about page 50 -- and feel cautiously optimistic.

It has the advantage of taking up the idea of games and of being a game (it would appear so, anyway), which is one of my themes or lenses or whatever. It has the disadvantage of being alarmingly long, but I could work with that.

I really want there to be a magic answer to this problem of the Novel that just softly descends on me like, well, you know, starlight. Snow.

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Partway through this term, no doubt as a coping mechanism for actual life, I got obsessed with role-playing games.

Folks! I don't know if you know this, but there are a lot of games.

Let me propose a nonce spectrum, for this post only, from story prompt to rule set, where on one end is an improvised story based on a few seed ideas, and on the other an elaborate clockwork mechanism like D&D.

Just lately I'm captivated by games that lean towards the story-prompt end of the spectrum, which I found out about through the Party of One Podcast -- listening to Johnny Sims play Big Fight Feel with the host, Jeff Stormer, using MacGuffin & Co.'s micro-setting Primetime Colosseum.

Big Fight Feel is a great storytelling Q&A game that develops the backstory to a climactic pro wrestling match. It is a hack of In the Air Tonight, which tells suspense-heist-chase stories. Air is inspired by the "In the Air Tonight" scene from the Miami Vice TV show. Stormer has also done a playthrough of another Q&A game called Knowing You, which tells the story of a relationship in reverse, from breakup to first meeting.

What I like about story games is that even this minimal mechanic of the questions lifts away a lot of the stakes of "proper writing" and lets people revel in story.

So for my creative writing class, I made a little hack of the hack. It's very much a mini-game, designed to be played in a few minutes.


* * * * * * 

Getting There: A Collaborative Question-Based Story Game

(This game is a quick hack of “In the Air Tonight” by Austin Ramsay)

 

This game creates a story between two people, discovered through asking and answering questions.

Decide who is PERSON 1 and who is PERSON 2. Ask and answer the questions in turn.

Answer spontaneously, as the ideas come to you. Let the story take shape. If one person is having trouble coming up with an answer, the other can help them brainstorm.

When you have finished asking and answering the questions, use your story as a prompt to write.

 

PERSON 1: What vehicle are we driving and what’s wrong with it?

[PERSON 2 replies]

PERSON 2: Why are we late and whose fault was it?

[PERSON 1 replies]

PERSON 1: What are we bringing with us and what did we forget?

[PERSON 2 replies]

PERSON 2: Where are we going, and who chose the destination?

[PERSON 1 replies]

PERSON 1: What are you not telling me until we get there?

[PERSON 2 replies]

PERSON 2: What happens when we arrive?

[PERSON 1 replies]

* * * * * * 


My colleague and I did a quick playtest. We ended up as waster surfers on our way to a family reunion in a broke-down Vanagon burning oil, on a sweltering day, with a Styrofoam cooler full of fresh fish on rapidly-melting ice, trying to make it to the Okanagan in time to show everyone that we can too accomplish something, even if it isn't getting jobs, except we end up at the Naramata ER because it turns out, hey, we're also having a baby, so in the end my sister gets stuck with all that fish.

I must say I feel quite satisfied by that outcome.

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I've just finished Maria Campbell's collection Stories of the Road Allowance People,1 which I both ordered online in the 1995 edition and put on hold at the library in the 2010 edition, because impatient. The 2010 edition includes one more story and a CD with fiddle music, which I alas cannot play on my computer -- I'll have to make a rare journey in to the office.

The transcription of these stories is interestingly complicated. Most were, if I understand properly, first told to Campbell in Michif2. Then they were translated into Village English, the dialect of English used in Campbell's community. So the stories are translated into English with a Michif accent.

Two interesting linguistic features of Campbell's transcription of Village English:

1. Campbell writes can when the person says can't. I think this is because the final T of can't is dropped. That's similar to the BC Interior accent I have, where can is usually said more like kn and can't is kaʔ with a nasalized vowel. I cn do it. I ca' do it.

As a reader, you just have to figure out from context that this is can' rather than can.

2. Campbell's Village English doesn't have gendered pronouns, so everyone is "he" in these stories. I enjoy that a lot.

Campbell learned the stories from old men in Métis communities (4). She doesn't name the individual storytellers, so a reader can't tell how many voices are here, though I think you can hear different ways of telling come through.

What I find most captivating about these stories is the way that big history is so familiar and so recent in them. So there are some great tall tales, and a story about shapechangers, but also there are stories about Gabriel Dumont and Louis Riel and the North-West Resistance. Often these are all the same story. The storytellers weave these elements so fluidly that it's possible to miss how masterful that movement often is.

There's a version of the story of Almighty Voice, which could make a really beautiful lesson combined with Daniel David Moses' play Almighty Voice and His Wife, one of the first Indigenous-authored plays to see mainstream production (in 1992, six years after The Rez Sisters), and, say, an encyclopedia-style version of the story for contrast.

My favorite story, which I would love to research further, is "Joseph's Justice."

The story is about a Métis man who doesn't fight in the Resistance -- he just wants to live his life.

Then Joseph runs into the English general who is taking Louis Riel to Regina:

Dah Anglais General he takes Louis
and dah udder mans to Regina
where hees gonna put dem in dah jail so dey can go to
dah court.
Of cours he never got all of dem
jus Louis
cause Louis him
he gives hees self up.
Dah udder ones
dey was capture but not Gabriel dough.
Oh no!
Him and Michel Dumas
dey run away to dah States an hide.
Ooh Gabe him
he die before he give hisself up.
Dats dah kine of mans he was.
Louis him
he was differen.
Differen from Gabe and all dah udders.
I guess you can say he was a spirit man. (93)

The intimacy with Riel and Dumont and Dumas is so moving.

Joseph is walking home with his gun and beaver pelts (95) and the soldiers decide to arrest him, even though he's had nothing to do with the war. He is dragged into court, but the judge believes him and he's released. Then Joseph asks for his gun and his furs back:

He say dah judge and all dah government peoples
dey jus laugh at him
an dey tell him
he should be grateful he don get hanged or go to
Stony Mountain Jail. (100)

But Joseph is not taking any more shit, so he files charges against the general. An Irish lawyer helps him out, and, after a long struggle, he wins! But he still doesn't get his stuff back.

And then the storyteller says this:

Dat General
he become a hell of a hero for putting down dah
Breeds of Batoche.
Fars I'm concern
he don have much to brag bout.
Five tousan of dem an less den a hundred of us.
....
My ole uncle Alcid
he was dere
an he say dere was less den a hundred at Batoche.

And I stop, and I count.

It's 1995 when this book is published, probably a little earlier when Campbell writes down the story. Say the storyteller is 70 in 1995; then he's born in 1925. The North-West Resistance was in 1885. Say his uncle was 70 in 1935 to tell him this story at age 10. That would put his uncle's birth in 1865 -- 20 at the time of the Resistance. This guy, hanging out in his kitchen telling Maria Campbell this story -- his uncle was there.

That kind of intimacy between 1995 and 1885 isn't something I have experienced or even really imagined. I can see why it would be so for the storyteller, for Campbell, but I have nothing like that in my sense of community, of time, of history.

Anyway, I'd love to teach that story, too, for its beautiful braiding of personal and national history, of satire and comedy and tragedy. It's like a Victor Hugo novel in miniature.

* * * * * *

The book is one of many mentioned in Jo-Ann Archibald's Indigenous Storywork. From the list I made of her suggestions, I ordered this, and George Clutesi's books, and Keeping Slug Woman Alive, an earlier book about teaching storywork.

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Notes

1. Campbell on the title: "You will have to do your own research .... however, I can tell you that the name Road Allowance People was coined by white government officials and land owners to describe the dispossessed Métis people who, having nowhere to go after the Resistance of 1885, built their homes on unoccupied crown lands, more often land that had been set aside for highways or roads" (4).

2. Michif is the Metis language, grown out of Cree and French, with some English and Anishinaabe elements (The Canadian Encyclopedia).

In searching for more information about Michif I found some very exciting statistics like "94% of Michif nouns come from French and 99% of the verbs come from Cree" (The Polyglot Files). That kind of information makes me all dreamy.

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The long short term is over -- my seven-week lit course has run it. This was the Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them theme. Thank you again for all of your ideas and suggestions. [personal profile] highlyeccentric, the Gawain Texts were a huge hit. The class thanks you.

I think on the whole it went rather well, though of course I have some changes to make. I hope I'll get to run it again.

One thing that worked beautifully was adding the thread of Indigenous stories. I was worried that they would feel like an afterthought, but they enriched the material enormously. I would be more surefooted with them next time.

In the fantasized future version of the course, I think I'd like to have three strands of literary/fantastic traditions. This is tricky as I don't know a third well enough to teach it at the moment -- something for a long-term research project.

I had not a drop of energy beyond work for anything else, even the beautiful dialogue here at Dreamwidth, which I have missed. I'd like to do a week-by-week breakdown of the course and how it went, here -- for my own interest, at least. I may even manage it -- I've only two courses for the rest of the summer.

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radiantfracture: John Simm with quotation from Life on Mars, "On the whole, I prefererred the coma." (john simm)
Coughing and/or sleeping

Sick again all this past week. It seems to be lifting.

For two nights I couldn't sleep. After the first night, I was strangely energized; after the second, I was all in ruins.

The next night, I worked out I could sleep if I sat on the futon (which sits on the floor), then propped my torso up on the bed with pillows and quilts. This way, I could lie upright but completely supported. I listened to the soundtrack of West Wing episodes all night and finally slept, not heavily but at least for a reasonable duration. Last night I slept in a more usual position and it seemed all right.

I've had these happy dreams the last few days, jumbles of community and confusion, with Mild Peril but a general sense of positive action.

News in noises and images

I'm starting new courses on Monday. I'm running an online course for the first time, and tonight I finished a super goofy little audio intro for the course website. I open with the distinctive harmonica line from "The Times They are A-Changin" -- distinctive in this case for being almost unrecognizeable when played breathlessly upon my bent harmonica. This, because the long text for the course will be Alan Moore's Watchmen, and the Dylan song is, of course, played over the opening credits of the film version.

I want to watch the new MST3K, but I don't want to re-sub to NetFlix. LB & S & I are contemplating American Gods as our next group viewing project. Also, there are two episodes of John Oliver to watch.

Booking

Because of Backlisted podcast, I'm reading Jane Gardam's A Long Way from Verona, and it's really pretty wonderful. I've never read anything by Gardam, but I like her voice and I'm already seeking out more.

Mild spoilers and peril )

Money and planning and grimacing adulthood

I have been making a budget, a proper one, for the first time, well, probably ever. It shows me I am terrible with money, which I knew, and yet it grieves me. However, it also offers me scope for reform.

On Tuesday and Wednesday I was so committed to procrastination that I actually wrote two poems and sent them out, thus doubling my submission rate as compared to 2016. So I did *something* for poetry month.

Next up: meal planning.

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(Edited to correct spelling of Gardam's name and the title of her book -- I keep muddling it up with A Far Cry from Kensington, which I own -- somewhere -- but have not finished.)
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