Poetry month
Apr. 21st, 2022 08:31 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
radiantfractureRainskin shining on the black trampoline
Like empty asphalt, littered with leaf bits
and the undersized basketball resting
against the mesh, where it always sits
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Poems are difficult right now, but here is a small one. I feel like it could scan better if it's going to insist on rhyming.
I could, if I chose, write many odes to the trampoline outside my kitchen window and to the amount of space to which this apparatus hollowly lays claim.
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Like empty asphalt, littered with leaf bits
and the undersized basketball resting
against the mesh, where it always sits
* * * * * *
Poems are difficult right now, but here is a small one. I feel like it could scan better if it's going to insist on rhyming.
I could, if I chose, write many odes to the trampoline outside my kitchen window and to the amount of space to which this apparatus hollowly lays claim.
{rf}
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Date: 2022-04-21 04:00 pm (UTC)I like that.
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Date: 2022-04-21 10:08 pm (UTC)Does it convey my very slight irritation that something so large is used so rarely
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