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branchandroot
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Date: 2017-10-23 09:34 pm (UTC)Quite a lot of the poem is worth hanging onto. I didn't find the register to be offputting, I like the initial question, and "Make up your mind: are you a ruin or a desert?" and much of what it follows wouldn't need any editing at all.