i wonder if you want a more active verb there? i (sat, stood, something else) transfixed
i love the rest of it!
and I'm glad you got to see it! we saw a red ephemeral trace a gazillion miles down the coast from you in Cazadero. the phone saw it better than we did, tho after a while we could mostly tell where it was.
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Date: 2024-10-12 05:46 am (UTC)by the thought
i wonder if you want a more active verb there? i (sat, stood, something else) transfixed
i love the rest of it!
and I'm glad you got to see it! we saw a red ephemeral trace a gazillion miles down the coast from you in Cazadero. the phone saw it better than we did, tho after a while we could mostly tell where it was.