Poem post: stunbone

[radiantfracture]

Where is there to sit exactly
If everything is shining on me

Friend, you have buttsense
you have stone buns, as your grandma says
Here in the driftwood feeling sundrunk, sunbent
Sensate among the ebb tones of the sea

I thought you said stun bone
You draw with a stick among the ebb stones
The tide wriggles up the sand grooves
Your breathing makes the subtones shimmer

You draw the water up to bait our shoes
Just for the craft of it, just because you can do it
Like a gull riding on the sky tide
Laughing at our temporary ruin



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Every morning very nearly without fail I solve the Merriam-Webster Blossom puzzle, and then I re-solve it to see if I can get a higher score, and if I'm not careful this becomes a kind of intellectual busywork I can use to distract myself from actual writing.

So a thing I'm trying to do (among all the other things) is to use the puzzle as a prompt. Inevitably each group of letters generates a semantic zone. Real and nonce words produce themselves. The letterset today was BENOSTU.


Here's a less complete poem from Sunday (letterset EINRTVW):

The riverine interview of winter,
that inept vintner: cool distillate
interrogates the view, shreds and repurposes it,
turns window to vitrine
where the morning light, when it comes,
cold citrine, tobacco stain,
will ennerve us, animate the inert twin



...Not sure what I planned to do with that twin, but I will let you know.


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Comments

[ranunculus]

Every morning I do the New York Times Suduko (hard) puzzle. Occasionally I will redo to see what my score would have been if I had been awake enough to see a really obvious combination...

[sovay]

Poem post: stunbone

Hey, I love this one.

[adore]

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[radiantfracture]

Heh, thanks.

[loess]

I never would've thought to use something like that as inspiration. I like what you've done with them.

[radiantfracture]

When you are very good at tricking yourself out of writing, it helps to practice tricking yourself back into writing...

[sabotabby]

This is so cool.